Thursday, November 20, 2008

Untitled - Part 34

So far.

Thirty-fourth

“They’re not answering,” said Tommy.

“Christ,” said Jackie. “What a fucking mess.”

“What are we going to do?” Tommy asked.

“You’re going to call Woodard.”

“What am I supposed to say?”

“We’ll make up a story. We have to get him out of the house until we find our guys.”

1 comments:

Pinko Punko said...

The missed phone call gambit always kills me. It KILLS me with the tension. If you had had them call and have it be busy because the phone ringing now is not the phone call we thing it is, but that phone call comes in at the same time that would KILL me because I have a complex about that stuff happening because it always does. Worse would be two people calling each other at the same time so even if they had call waiting, the call at just the right time that it goes to voice mail for both of them. Then I would pass out because of the tension.