Tuesday, October 28, 2008

Untitled - Part 11

So far.

Eleventh

Jeffrey pulled into the driveway. His wife and son were at the door.

“Where were you?” Linda called. “We were getting worried.”

“I stopped for donuts,” Jeffrey replied. “Chocolate.” He held up a bag. “There was a line.”

“You’re sweet,” said Linda. “Coffee?”

He gave her a kiss. “Yes. Thanks.”

4 comments:

zombie rotten mcdonald said...

I get the impression this is going to end.... poorly.

Kathleen said...

Snag is really Quentin Tarantino

zombie rotten mcdonald said...

Quentin Snagatino.

Jennifer said...

I get the impression this is going to end.... poorly

But there are... donuts!!! And coffee!!